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Why, hello there! 27 March to 3 April, at your service. This week marks 700 days in flight on A Moment In The Sun. Tenacious, aren’t I? 🙂

Last Sunday I drew up the beginning and end of the film as storyboards. The beginning and end of the story are as good as set in stone now. Possibly there could be a gag involving an oozing eye.

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Over the course of this week I did a second-and-a-half draft of the antics that link the beginning and the end. Mainly it’s about shortening exposition, punching up funny bits, looking for clearer poses, that kind of thing.

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And I’ve finally figured out what Pointy is doing in an environment completely unsuitable for him, after all this time. Yay! The story feels nicely complete with that bit of information.

Today and tomorrow I’m getting the story to present. Then, to the pitch video!

That’s it for this week. Thanks for reading! 🙂

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A creator of quollity stuff.

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